In some countries more and more international travel is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh the disadvantage.

In many parts of the world, the

tourism

industry is blossoming at a very rapid pace. I believe it to be extremely beneficial not only in terms of cultural exchange, but

also

in terms of lowering

unemployment rate

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the unemployment rate

.

This

essay will explore how these two mega-advantages have the potential to eclipse any drawbacks.

Tourism

brings forth a lot of mega-merits.

Firstly

,

this

new trend facilitates the spread of culture across the

border which

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border, which

is normally confined to countries. As nations do not have

opportunity

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the opportunity

an opportunity

to introduce their culture to other nations, but

tourism

allows them to have

this

benefit.

This

fact can be better explained with an example of report related to sales of Italian attire, which revealed that the recent surge in popularity of Italian cloths has been attributed to boom of

tourism industry

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the tourism industry

.

Secondly

,

tourism

facilitates countries in terms of creating more job opportunities for their nationals. As in these societies, international travel helps local residents to establish

small business

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a small business

to earn their

livelihood which

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livelihood, which

in turn

boost

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boosts

the employment rate of the country. Take an example of

Japan where

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Japan, where

a recent survey revealed that the majority of locals in Qui Li are attached with tourist jobs.

Hence

, increased international travel has benefited societies in reducing the unemployment.

However

, the only minor drawback that I can relate

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to

this

development is that at time the beauty of tourist spots is affected due to

greater number

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a greater number

the greater number

of visitors, but

this

disadvantage is extremely rare and elusive and can be compensated, if the government shoulders the responsibility of maintenance of these places. To sum

up from

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up, from

above discussion

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the above discussion

, it can be concluded that the benefit of

tourism

especially in terms of expanding culture and facilitating the jobless people can easily overshadow the minor drawback related to the quality of the product.