Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and the human experience, whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people are of the opinion that education is not strictly limited to just English, math and science, other subject, namely

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an indispensable role in nurturing the younger generation and

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should be taught in their schooling days.

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, other people have a contrasting view as they feel that

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and resources spend on the subject, tune is wasteful. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and review my opinion. On the one hand, there are many benefits associated with music.

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, rock aids in relaxation and for

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reason, children should take a break and partake in a singing lesson once in a while to assist in their learning progress in relation to denser and stressful subjects

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as mathematics and science.

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, musical education encourages students to express their feelings and creativity alike, which is important in human interaction. It helps to bring everyone from all walks of life together and share the enjoyment

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children are able to bond.

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, educators are strongly encouraged to instil the

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of rap to the students.

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, they are many who are not in favour of imparting the knowledge of

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the tune

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to the students. There are several reasons to why

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opinion is gathered,

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, singing is ubiquitous, so eventually people will encounter them at one point of their lives,

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, it is argued that teachers spending moment on it, is unnecessary and redundant.

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and resources should expend wisely on other subjects

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as math, language and science, which teach the youth's logic and help them to comprehend and perceive logical aspects of their future endeavour. For

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reason, some people concur that other subjects are more paramount as compared to music. In conclusion, music should not be taught at the expense of other subjects. Schools should adopt a balanced approach in educating the youth and let them decide which path they want to strive in. After all, the purpose of the institution is to prepare students for their lives ahead of them. As long as schools able to deliver the lesson diligently, no time and resources will be wasted regardless of any subjects.