giving children and adolescents pocket mkney is common throughout the world. discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practice and give your own opinion.

It is ordinary to give children an allowance, especially when they are under eighteen.
This
habit can be harmful and has more negative points comparing with its positive ones. So, in my opinion, some changes should happen in order to compensate its disadvantages.
First
of all, when children are not educated or ready enough to work, they do not have income. So,
this
may interrupt them from putting all their endeavour on their tasks.
Therefore
, they cannot focus on their short and long term targets. So, if they deal with financial troubles, related to their age, they would be prevented from achieving their desire. So, it is a well-acted to support them not only emotionally, but
also
by preparing an income source for them
Moreover
, just letting them having fund easily is not recommended by almost every experts. Giving wage to children for free, may make them lazy.
For example
, they just be accustomed to living with that amount of wage, which is their portion.
In addition
, because they get the cash without any trouble, it is easy to misuse it.
For instance
, they use it on drugs or other harmful usages. So, there is a need to provide enough income for them to let them focusing on their duties.
However
, it can be dangerous to have money without any activities, since they do not find how hard is making money.
Therefore
, they should be paid based on their success on the subjects, which they are interested in.
such
Suggestion
Such
as sports, arts, or educational fields.
Also
, they can earn by doing household chores like washing the dishes, or doing the laundry in their leisure time. To conclude, a habit of giving salary to children weekly, or monthly is customary worldwide. So it can be a good decision, which can
last
for decades.
However
, it would be better if they get it based on their activities, to be aware of the difficulties of making money and do not waste the budget on unnecessary fields.
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