IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past? To what extent do you agree?

#population #internet #text #face #communication
An increasing number of people are using internet and various chat applications to communicate with others;
therefore
, it seems that people will hardly have any in person communication in
future
. I completely agree with
this
 statement owing to the advancement of technology and increase in people's working hours. One of the main reasons of increased usage of social media applications to interact with people is the long working hours of professionals. Competition between organizations has increased dramatically,
thus
, every employer demand that his or her employee work for approximately 10 hours or more.
As a result
, people often leave their home early in the morning and return late in the evening due to which they hardly get any time to meet people and talk.
Therefore
, they use various chat applications to interact with the loved ones or neighbours. I do not think
this
 situation is going to improve in
future
Suggestion
the future
 as people are becoming more and more busy with their work life. Another reason behind lack of
face
 to
face
 communication is the advancement of technology. A large number of chat applications are being introduced almost everyday which attracts people especially youth.
Consequently
, people prefer using them
instead
 of meeting people in person. Now even job interviews are conducted on various applications
such
 as Skype and Zoom. I think
this
 trend will continue in
future
 as well. In conclusion, people's hectic job schedule and increasing number of social media applications will make people choose virtual communication over
face
 to
face
 interaction.
This
 will continue to happen in the
future
.
Submitted by UAT on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: