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People believe that in order to reduce road accidents it should be mandatory for drivers to retake the driving test every 3 years. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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There is no doubt that
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 accidents have increased in vast numbers across the globe. Some people are of the opinion that recurring the driving test of the drivers after every quarter of the year will help minimize
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 accidents.
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, I completely disagree with the above statement and believe that
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 infrastructure should be improved and people should follow traffic rules to reduce these accidents.
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 with, there are many highways in most of the developing countries with maximum speed of 50 kilometres per hour, which have big potholes and the
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 surfaces are unevenly constructed that makes it difficult to control vehicles.
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, the condition of the roads sometimes gets worse during monsoon and sometimes rainy season.
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, driving person met with an accident and
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, results in a person’s death at the end.
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, according to a survey, more than 50% of the
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 accident occur due to bad roads or potholes. So, I think roads should be improved by the government.
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, the other main reason of the
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 accidents are absence of the strict traffic rules.
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, most of the drivers do not obey traffic rules, as there are no much fine for disobeying rules.
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, if a driver is driving 70 kilometres per hour in the zone of 50, he/she can escape easily by paying small amount of fine.
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, pedestrians in most of the cases, do not cross the roads through the zebra crossing which led to increase in
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 accidents. For
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 reason, I believe that government should some strict rules. To conclude, to handle
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 issue of increasing in
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 accidents, the government should be working on progress of
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 infrastructure and impose strict laws, rather than making it compulsory to take retests after every 3 years.

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