Write a letter to counsel regarding the issue of waste in the lake

#counsel #waste #lake

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to propose my idea which can help us control the pollution in our famous Noida

Lake

. I live in Sector 78 and

last

week, I visited the

lake

just to get natural air and walk. Unfortunately, I observed that there are a lot of plastic particles floating

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the water.

Also

, there are very few dustbins available at the place, because of that people are throwing all the waste here and there.

This

disturbing

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natural

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view of the

lake

and causing health problems for the people who are living in the nearby area. I think we need to restrict the use of plastic around the

lake

area. We can do

this

by putting a check post at the main gate which will make sure that people are not allowed to enter with plastic material, bags, or containers.

Also

, we can increase the number of dustbins around

this

area which will help to manage the waste around the

lake

. I hope that you will consider these ideas or any other better ones which will help to address the threatening pollution issue around the

lake

. Regards, Pooja

Submitted by Pooja Kulkarni on Mon Jun 22 2020

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1Word repetition
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3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

195 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to counsel regarding the issue of waste in the lake

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