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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

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Nowadays, mankind is facing
possibilities
Suggestion
the possibilities
 of having issues with their health and that happens because people do not pay
enought
as much as necessary
enough
 attention to their
weight
. There are a numerous reasons
of
Suggestion
for
 that, but there are some solutions that can solve that issue. Sedentary life leads to obesity.
This
 day, people do not do enough
sport
 due to office work style. Most of adults have to sit at work,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
 they drive home, and after they take a rest on a couch.
As a result
, the quantity of physical movements
tend
Suggestion
tends
 to zero.
Moreover
, inappropriate
food
 habits have a
dramatical
Suggestion
dramatically
dramatic
influensce
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
influences
 on a person's
weight
. With
popularity
Suggestion
the popularity
 of junk meals and sugary
prodacts
commodities offered for sale
products
, people tend to gain extra
weight
,
as a result
 obese society with health issues.
For instance
,
adiposity
 has an alarming impact on cardiovascular system and it may increase
chances
Suggestion
the chances
 of cancer. On top of that, due to huge
weight
, bones
has
Suggestion
have
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
 much loading, and in the future, that person will have vital problems. Some actions are required to avoid that situation.
First
 of all,
sport
 must be rewarded.
For example
, people have to use some devices that would count their activity, and afterwards, those who has the highest level, would get some perks as discounts in
sport
 shops, or insurance company would
decrese
decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease
 their payments.
Furthermore
, the
food
 production should be regulated more strictly. Companies that produce a range of meal products have to use
more high
Suggestion
higher
highest
 quality
ingridients
a component of a mixture or compound
ingredients
ingredient
, add more nutrients and vitamins. That process must be controlled by the government and if the rules were broken, the respective punishment would be
taken
Suggestion
taking
 place. In
cunclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
consolation
, lack of
sport
 activity and abusing of unhealthy
food
 lead to
owerweight
usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
,
consequently
, that will have a negative impact on peoples' health,
however
, rewarding for
active lifestyle
Suggestion
active lifestyles
an active lifestyle
 and limitation in quantity of harmful ingredients in
food
 may
will
come up, as of a liquid
well
 be a solution.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary
  • caloric intake
  • genetics
  • nutritional awareness
  • processed foods
  • fast food
  • lifestyle diseases
  • preventative measures
  • tax incentives
  • urban planning
  • community gardens
  • wellness initiatives
  • dietary guidelines
  • physical fitness
  • calorie-dense
  • portion control
  • metabolic rate
  • health literacy
  • food deserts
  • work-life balance
  • junk food
  • BMI (Body Mass Index)
  • non-communicable diseases
  • food labeling
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