Write a letter to a friend telling them about an interesting website you found. Tell your friend How you found it How it can help How you use it

Dear Riya, Hope you are doing well in
this
lockdown. I was going through your Instagram posts, from the past few days. All the
bags
look amazing. There is uniqueness in all the items displayed in those photographs. I know that you have great potential, but you need
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platform. I
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good news for you. While I was looking at different laptop
bags
on the internet, I came across an interesting
website
.
This
website
is meant for new artists, who are extremely innovative. People like you who design and develop their own products by using different materials and need
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to display their products.
This
website
can be the biggest turning point of your life. I know from the past couple of years you have been making small pouches, backpacks, sling
bags
and purses from used jeans. You enjoy experimenting with denim and always add some new unique element of creativity
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all your
bags
. You can display all your items on
this
website
,
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so that people can easily view them. Once the customers go through the products on the
website
,
then
they easily contact you and
further
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. Warm wishes, Shreya
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