Children are facing more pressure from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of such pressure? What measures can be taken to reduce it?

Children nowadays are
faceing
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facing
stress from different part of their life,
Such
as a school, a Family.
Thus
, that may cause various consequences in their development.
Firstly
, the high expectation of the
gurdian
a plot of ground where plants are cultivated
garden
because they expect many things without showing whether their children have potential to fulfil their requirements.
As a result
, They send them to join some coaching classes.So that, children spend most of their time to study and rarely get 4 or 5 hours to sleep.
Thus
, that hectic schedule built pressure on their mind and suffer from various mental as well as the physical problems.
In addition
, the administration concentrates on academic growth only and arrange some extra classes for students which makes the situation worse.
For instance
, a report generated by Europe health department shows that around 40% adults are being suffered from Mental disorder because of too much burden of academic requirements.
Secondly
, adolescent demanding some costly electronic equipments which are not afforded by their parents.
Moreover
, they choose some
unappropriate
suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc
appropriate
ways to achieve their needs. To illustrate
this
, I would like to show an incident happened in Los angel, USA where a 16 year old boy stole an iPhone from the store and after a detailed investigation, they found that he stole that thing because of his colleagues have the same phone.
Moreover
, his parents
also
denied to buy.
On the other hand
, to control
this
phenomenon parents and teacher both have to know the ability of their children.
In addition
, the government should encourage educational institute to add co-curricular activities in their syllabus.
Furthermore
, Children should maintain their time by doing an activity which they like
,
Accept space
,
As a result
they may learn the time management. To conclude, I reiterate that pressure may cause many mental problems which may eliminate their growth. But, the government and parents should play an important role to handle
this
consequence.
Submitted by pd57062 on

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