you recently moved to a different house. write a letter to an English speaking friend
Dear Dayo,
I am writing with regard to the recent complaints
of
the reception area. One of the frequent complaints is the inadequate number of seats available for guests during the check-in process. Another one is that most times, customers wait for long periods before being attended to. These complaints should be looked into and not be treated with levity.
Let me explain the reasons why fixing Change preposition
about
this
should be paramount for us in more detail. The first
is because the welcoming area is part of our image which can either work for or against the company. If our visitors are not well treated, they might decide not to collaborate with us. Another reason is because
the reception area is our visitor's Replace the word
that
first
point of contact with us; therefore
, the way we treat them is important for their future references of our company.
I would suggest that more seats be provided there. Also
, I would recommend that more than one receptionist be
on duty at a time, so as to reduce the waiting time.
I look forward to seeing these problems solved.
Yours sincerely,
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Ayools
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Ayoola
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite