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Some people think that the Internet is a useful tool for education while others believe it can be distracting to students.What are the advantages and disadvantages of using the Internet in teaching and learning?

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Many a times it is argued that,
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 is a useful tool for education.
Firstly
,
internet
 has come into the picture some 30 years before. Before
this
, only printed or written material was the only source of learning and to pass on the
information
. After the
internet
 has come, after a few years,
Firstly
, Google, has come into existence and captured the whole market, all over the world. You name it, Google provides the text
information
, on that topic.
Secondly
, YouTube, provides the videos with almost all the
information
. Learning has become very easy after
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 has come. From small learning which was used for Play group for advanced and complicated
information
 is available for research scholars
also
 on both, the Google and the YouTube. Self learning,
information
 search has become very easy.
For instance
, because of, Covid 19, Corona Virus, lockdown has happened, almost all over the world. Distance and online learning is possible, only because of
this
internet
, in
this
 Covid 19 situation. To discuss the disadvantages,
firstly
, adult materials and visuals are easily available on the
internet
, which causes a psychological effect on the children.
Secondly
, because of adult dating sites, some are opting for cross relationships and breaking the noble family bonding. To conclude, in my opinion, the advantages are much more comparable to its disadvantages.
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