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The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year. What do you think of this trend

#trend #education #move #exams #school #year
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Examination
have always been used
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has always been used
 as
a a
indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise
a
 test of knowledge in many educational sector the current traditional exam has always been magnified as
a
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an
 intellectual
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someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)
ancestor
 which entirely is not true. .
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 the trend to move the traditional method of examination
to
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of
 continuous assessment is highly recommendable and should be
encourage
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encouraged
 because not only does it develop a
child
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 learning ability it
also
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 help
t
in the direction of
to
 correct and lead a
child
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 through the appropriate way without
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 left behind. Continuous assessment dealsbwith testing a
child
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 ability frequently and without waiting at the ending of an academic sector, continuous assement help a
child
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 to prepare for a test a any given moment, since most a times it is not announced, it
also
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 eliminate examination malpracrise which is rampard and digging deep into the educational sector, continuous
also
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 help a teacher to know if his or her teaching is been understood and if not look for a better method to teach for a better understanding,continuous assessment elpnin better understanding
also
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 when the the teacher does his or her correction for students that fail, makingbit clearer for them and hard to fail again.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • current trend
  • traditional exams
  • continuous assessment
  • school year
  • deeper understanding
  • ongoing feedback
  • improvement
  • pressure
  • stress
  • real-life situations
  • continuous learning
  • evaluation
  • abilities
  • progress
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