Some people believe that is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these view and give your opinion.

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Currently, sharing a lot of
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as much as possible in research, business and the academic is great.
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, some people do not think like that, they think that some
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is too vital to
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topic. People use technology all the time, especially on social
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some
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or news are
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many people extremely love to
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every
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that they know.
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, the news that some countries have begun to do the research of anti medicine for COVID-19, many reporters want to know about the detail and
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news to people
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as the trade price of the company will drop
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some people want to
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by positive intention, but it is not allowed to do that and it seems like to break the rule and regulation.
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why not every
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can
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freely. Conclusion, sharing
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is good, but people have to control themselves. In my opinion, some
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is too valuable to be shared freely. People need to think a
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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