some students take one year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to travel or to work. do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

A gap year has come front of parents for a long time, especially in Asia
.
Accept space
.
The
exactly
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exact
benefit of
gap year
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a gap year
is a myth. Some families suppose that it is a
ludicurous
broadly or extravagantly humorous; resembling farce
ludicrous
, while the others are not. In the following paragraphs
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Accept space
,
I will explore the rationale for both beliefs as well as
profeer
present for acceptance or rejection
proffer
proper
justification for my own viewpoint. Regarding those who enter into a university suddenly, they gain some mainly benefits in education. The
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vast
majority
keep
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keeps
study continually. So
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,
if you vanish from
educational system
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the educational system
an educational system
for a moment, you will not able to compete with your high school friends.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, stop studying for a year has a noticeably critical impact on knowledge.
Consequently
, you might not learn as well as your peers can.
Nevertheless
, I firmly believe that opinion is nonsense. The obvious reason is that we live in the
globalize
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globalized
globalizing
world. People across the world
are connected
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connect
via
internet
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the internet
, stuck with the old environment is obsolete.
Moreover
, extraordinary experience will be gained by learning from real life. When we grow up, those
experience
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experiences
will be develop
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will be developed
into a wisdom and provide us a tool for solving real world problems.
Infact
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In fact
, Havard Business Review published a research that found more than 70% of rising star employees had
traveld
traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term
travelled
or worked for a while. According to research,
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
and working
are play
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are playing
have played
a major role in improving of mindset. In sum, I am of opinion that the pros
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
outweighed
the cons in
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the long run
. I sincerely hope everyone will
coniderably
to a great extent or degree
considerably
about it again.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gap year
  • Academic momentum
  • Practical experience
  • Financial pressures
  • Interim period
  • Soft skills
  • Maturity
  • Independence
  • Career exploration
  • Re-adjustment
  • Social setbacks
  • Informed decision-making
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