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Nowadays young people spend too much of their time in shopping mall. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

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It
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It's
 often argued that Expending as well much
time
 in
shopping center
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a shopping centre
shopping centre
the shopping centre
shopping centres
 is
setbacks
structure where a wall or building narrows abruptly
set-back
 on youthful individuals. I completely agree with
this
 that will make a youngster to be a aimless person as well as
a
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an
 unbearable burden turning them into unemployment in the society. Passing maximum
time
 in shopping area
offer
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offers
 a
life
 in a devastating way which indicates a aimless
life
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
 the absence of right destination. It is high
time
 to study hard for the youthful one to shape a secured
life
 by setting up a
dreamy
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dream
 destination. For
examaple
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
examples
, Dr Mohammad Yonuse, noble holder in peace, is a successful man by fixing
a
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an
 achievable goal in the beginning of
life
 was impossible wasting
time
 in
shopping mall
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a shopping mall
the shopping mall
 a big
time
.
Secondly
, In case of losing valuable
time
 to walk here and there and making a
life
 without qualification are unable to get a good job to lead a happy
life
.
As a result
, ultimately they are being unemployments are shown
a
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an
 extra burden for any society.
On the other hand
, several individuals think that timing in a shopping
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 is a great source to acquire a vast knowledge from the reality
wiill
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
well
 help them in the critical moments
that is
 totally impossible in absence of passing
time
 in
shopping area
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the shopping area
a shopping area
. That's why There is no alternative way
lo
(astrology) a person who is born while the sun is in Leo
Leo
 lead a
life
 very smoothly and successfully without gaining practical knowledge. To conclude, In the culminating
points
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point
 that spending
time
 in shopping mall may gain little
knowledge
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Knowledge
 to lead a
life but
Accept comma addition
life, but
 I believe that to avoid wasting
time
 in
shopping mall
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a shopping mall
the shopping mall
 is a key to succeed in
life
.
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