You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: -- when and where you hired it -- describe how the accident happened -- what kind of action did you take after the accident

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my sincere concerns that earlier I rented a motorcar from your local automobile agency, whereas, I have met with an unfortunate minor incident. On Sunday, June 7, 2020, at around 10.00 in the morning, I leased a four-wheeler

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, Toyota Etios Liva, car plate number TN43 Y 8055 from a nearby car dealer which is five

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away from Ooty railway station. Along with my family, I was

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to a nearby beach, unexpectedly, the motorbike from the opposite side lost its control and in the blink of my eye, it collided with my vehicle and caused unavoidable damage. Immediately after the crash, I informed a technician to analyze the issue and he instructed it will take two more days to fix the impairment other than that everything is good at its function,

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I left the car at the mechanic shed. I would be grateful if you could accept my apology as well as I am ready for any type of compensation for the disruption. Your’s Faithfully, Elizabeth Manickam.

elizabeth mTue Jun 23 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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8 paragraphs

180 words

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insurance
liability
emergency services
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evidence
witnesses
contact details
repair
compensation
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