LIVING IN A BIG CITY IS BECOMING DIFFICULT. WHAT ARE SOME PROBLEMS CAUSED BY A MODERN LIFE AND WHAT COULD WE DO TO SOLVE THEM?
It is believed that living in a big
city
is becoming more and more difficult nowadays. This
essay will state some difficulties caused by a modern life and suggest some solution to tackle those problems.
To move to a big city
would be easy to find a job and make their life better than rural areas. Consequently
, the city
’s environment becomes extremely contaminated. Indeed, there are
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is
millions vehicles commute
on the road Suggestion
a millions vehicles commute
everyday
; and traffic jam appears in Suggestion
every day
big
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a big city
the big city
big cities
city
on a regular basis a day. Besides
, factories are releasing a large amount of greenhouse gases which may destroy terribly atmosphere. To take the edge off this
problem, Government
should encourage residents to use public transportations Suggestion
the Government
such
as bus, subway, coach, and other similar things. In addition
, government
should launch a zero-tolerance policy on the factory which releases the greenhouse gases or water contamination in a Suggestion
the government
city
; and they will have to be punished by paying enormous money if they pollute the environment.
The second
problem is the increase of cost of living. Undoubtedly, citizens have to handle many mandatory expenses such
as housing, food, utility bills, and other similar things. To mitigate this
issue, government
might reduce the tax on daily products or allocate money to the poor. Some subsidies Suggestion
the government
such
as reducing education fee, scholarship for poor’s children might help them feel better whose is being stressful about living in a
urban.
To sum up, there are some problems brought by living in a big Suggestion
an
city
, but we can solve by adapting those mentioned solutions.Submitted by Nhung Le on
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- however
- although
- even though
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