LIVING IN A BIG CITY IS BECOMING DIFFICULT. WHAT ARE SOME PROBLEMS CAUSED BY A MODERN LIFE AND WHAT COULD WE DO TO SOLVE THEM?
It is believed that living in a big
city
is becoming more and more difficult in the current society. This
essay will state some difficulties caused by a modern life and suggest some solutions to tackle those problems.
To move to a big city
would be easy to find a job and makes their life better than rural areas. Consequently
, the city
’s environment becomes extremely contaminated. Indeed, there are millions of vehicles, which commute on the road every day, and traffic jam appears in a big city
on a regular basis daily. Besides
, factories are releasing a large amount of greenhouse gases, which may terribly destroy the atmosphere. To take the edge off this
problem, the government should encourage residents to use public transportations such
as bus, subway, coach, and other similar things/vehicles. In addition
, the government should launch a zero-tolerance policy on the factory, which releases the greenhouse gases or causes water contamination in a city
, and they will have to be punished by paying an enormous amount of money if they pollute the environment.
The second
problem is the increase of the cost of living. Undoubtedly, citizens have to handle many mandatory expenses such
as housing, food, utility bills, and other similar things. To mitigate this
issue, the government might reduce the tax on daily products or allocate money to the poor. Some subsidies such
as reducing education fee, scholarship for poor’s children, might help them, who are stressful about living in an urban, feel better. By doing that, the prices would be decreased and become affordable to the majority of citizens, especially youngsters who are financially struggling.
To sum up, there are some problems brought by living in a big city
, but we can solve by adapting those mentioned solutions.Submitted by Nhung Le on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite