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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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, there has been a sharp rise in the road accident counts.
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, the best way to increase road safety is by minimising the number of vehicles, a few believe that some different better methods should be implemented. In recent
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, owing to, more usage of private cars the road traffic has risen up drastically leading to more accidents.
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, by decreasing car counts on the roads can help reduce the crowds. Due to
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, roads will be more spacious leading to drivers driving more safely. There are several ways to reduce vehicular traffic like developing more efficient public transports, using car pull for going to the same destination.
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, in Delhi 'odd-even' system is adopted in which only odd number plate cars can be used on one day and even on the other.
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, people argue that there are many other better ways to reduce accidents.
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 includes, ways like making lanes more broader and implementing strict laws and fines for breaking rules while driving, public awareness programs and many more.
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, often these methods take a lot of
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, in my opinion for fast results both
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 consuming there is a need that both the possible ways must be used in order to get a noticeable decline in accidents. To summarize, by reducing vehicle counts a sudden change can be
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 other methods can be used to along with it to get a more effective outcome.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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