In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they like. To what extent should children have to follow rules?

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Rules and regulations are mandatory to establish peace and prosperity in a
society
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. Our parents and family members used to teach us about norms and morality from the beginning of our childhood. Childhood is the best periods to build someone as a well behaved and decent person. So there might have some rules and regulations which should be followed strictly by any children. But too much strictness can ruin
there
of them or themselves
their
beautiful childhood. So we should remain mild enough in case of implementing rules on them.
when
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When
a
child
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started to realize about what is going on their
surrondings
the environmental condition
surroundings
from that moment their family members should begin to teach them about some basic ethics and norms which they must be needed to live in a
society
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. Every
society
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has some rules which should be followed strictly by its members. And if anyone encroached any rules they might get punished by the law enforcers. So if we are able to show them the right avenue from their early
age
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age, then
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peace will be established in
society
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. In modern
era most
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era, most
of the families get disrupted because of the rough behaviour of their
child
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. Every
parents
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parent
gave birth to their
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child
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children
by adopting a lot of prospects and hopes into them. But If any
child
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gets
ruined because of lack of knowledge and education
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then
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than
their parents suffers most. So
,
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,
if we consider in
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aspect,
then
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imposing strict rules for children is fair and justice.
On the other hand
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, Childhood is the period where is no bound and
limitness
the greatest possible degree of something
limits
. They loved to do what they like most. They are less likely to follow any restriction and barrier. At
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age we
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age, we
could teach them anything by being nice to them. There is no need for any strict regulations. It can destroy their psyche badly. Because during that period they
usally
under normal conditions
usually
dont
do not
don't
have the
matuarity
the period of time in your life after your physical growth has stopped and you are fully developed
maturity
to emulate any rules
drastictly
in a drastic manner
drastically
. It might confine their doorways and their mind
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. So, If we can give them
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an environment where they can construct their minimum level of morality by following their family members and
surrondings
the environmental condition
surroundings
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there is no need to destroy their golden period by implementing strict rules. In conclusion, There must have sufficient regulations which will help in nurturing a
child
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in a well mannered way. Rules and regulations are necessary for them, But not so acutely which can vanish their thinking capability. Every country has different culture which actually defines whether a
child
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has got raised by following strict rules or whether they will be allowed to do anything they like.
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