Public libraries will soon no longer be housed in a building as all facilities and books will be available online for all to access. Do the advantage of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that with the easy availability of the internet
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huge infrastructure of traditional
library
will be substituted by online
library
. While I accept that
this
development has some drawbacks, I believe that the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks. On the one hand online
library
has some detrimental impacts
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.
First
, online libraries can not reproduce the environment of traditional libraries. To illustrate, when people are in a quiet environment where everyone is reading people will
also
be motivated to their reading done
otherwise
impossible if they stay at home.
Moreover
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many people find reading printed material to be easier than reading material on a computer screen.
Second
, in many developing
country
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countries
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there are numerous of people do not have the access to the internet
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On the other hand
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In spite of the disadvantages mentioned above, there are two main advantages possessed by online
library
.
First
, electronic books are easily accessible anytime and anywhere, compared to a particular place of traditional libraries. The user of a digital
library
need not to go to the
library
physically, people from all over the world could gain access to the same information, as long as an Internet connection is available.
Second
, if traditional libraries are replaced by virtual libraries their spaces can be used to build
charity
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charitable
homes for the numerous homeless to live. In conclusion,
although
online
library
cannot provide the same environment as the traditional
library
, its reduction of physical boundary and time made the benefits weighed against the drawbacks.
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