due to increasing density of living areas in a city,most residents are suffering from physical and social dangers.consequently, they are against living in the city. to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Topic: More and more wild
animals
are on the verge of extinction
and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this
? What can be done to solve this
problem.
A wide range of wild Change the punctuation
?
animals
are to disappear or have the risk of extinction
in the near future. Some inevitable factors play an important role on
the elimination of Change preposition
in
animals
. Some reasons why the risk of extinction
grows are various, the most necessary one, however
, is hunting animals
by people for their valuable leather or parts of body
. Demand for natural Add an article
the body
materials
of high quality increases today and people find the
solutionCorrect article usage
a
on
hunting wild Change preposition
to
animals
and using them for business purposes regarding teeth
of elephants, Correct article usage
the teeth
leather
of tigers, etc. Add an article
the leather
As a
result
thousands of Add a comma
result,
animals
are killed by human beings. Luckily, the ways of solving this
problem have been discussed for years and discussions have ended with several resolutions which might reduce the hunting of animals
. The best way to fix the problem would be the change of demand for materials
of animals
which means any companies or works should produce products without using materials
of animal origin, instead
waste must be recycled and reused. Add a comma
instead,
For instance
, some solid materials
might be used on
making some house decorations or kitchen Change preposition
in
tool
, but not Fix the agreement mistake
tools
using
the horns of some Verb problem
apply
animals
that are durable and resilient for conditions. Consequently
, hunters will not find partner
to sell their Fix the agreement mistake
partners
materials
and kill animals
, as well. Therefore
, the process may turn back to the positive way that risk
of animal Correct article usage
the risk
extinction
will stop soon. In conclusion, there are many kinds of solutions about
Change preposition
to
this
circumstance, however
my point is the most significant one among them.Add a comma
however,
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion