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An increasing people thinks that the
car
is the main private transport for the city society.
This
essay will examine several issues that could be appeared by using
this
kind of
transportation
and a possible solution that can be applied to
this
issue. One of the major problems that can appear by using a private
car
is a high
traffic
rate
, which can lead to another problem, raising the concentration of particulate matters in the air. A high
traffic
rate
is the main problem faced by a city society. A City usually has a massive volume of the private
car
while sometimes the
rate
of
car
user is higher than the
rate
of new road construction.
As a result
, the road could not maintain all the cars in one go which can cause a high
traffic
rate
.
For instance
, in developing countries
such
as Indonesia, the new road construction
rate
is lower than the
rate
of the
car
user and private transport user which make Indonesia became one of the most
traffic
countries in the world. Other than that, using cars massively can cause a high pollutant concentration relished on the air and it cannot be controlled. The particulate matter concentration and some greenhouse gases can be very high and it can cause respiratory issues, particularly for the pedestrians.
Also
, it has a bad impact on long term living.
For instance
, the long term effect that we already experienced the small part of it is the depletion of the ozone layer by the greenhouse gases.
Furthermore
, the possible solution to fix
this
problem is the improvement of the public
transportation
system by the local government.
In other words
, public
transportation
needs to be improved so it can be more convenient, safe, comfortable and on time.
Besides
that, public
transportation
is using an LNG as a fuel source rather than gasoline, which is more environmentally friendly.
Thus
, by using public
transportation
, higher
traffic
rates and environmental degradation can be avoided. To sum up, high
traffic
rates and air pollution are the problems that can be appeared by using private
transportation
such
as
car
and the possible solution to fix
this
is to use the public
transportation
provide by the local government.
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