The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

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In
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great technological world, humans are creating lots of damage to our environment, and, there are few people who are trying to repair it. Companies and politicians should come forward to decrease
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damage, which is impacting our atmosphere at great number. One of the main reasons are, the smoke which is released by the factories. Though, many of these industries are located in the countryside, they are damaging the crop fields and the pollution released from these factories are taking the lives of so many innocent people. In fact, the chemicals and waste water are directly released into the seas and oceans, which is damaging the lives of marine creatures.
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, the pollution is a disastrous thing, by which, the whole world is facing. It's directly effecting the lungs of people, especially the people who are suffering from asthma, and it's led to many skin diseases.
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, a recent tragic incident happened in the southern part of India. The chemical has releases from the chemical industry due to the negligence of the workers. It spread very rapidly that, it covered more than 5 miles within five minutes. By
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, many people died where they were and many plants and crop fields have
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damaged. People believed that, it might be the accidental incident, but, no one knows that it happened only because of the negligence of the government. On the whole, I request organization and political people to come forward and look into
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situation. At least for now, take some safety precautions and try to make our environment healthy and wealthy.
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