Immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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My name is Zulema Moreno, I come from México but I´m

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immigrant in Spain. Maybe, the reason why I decided to

immigrate

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is one of the most common: I fall in love with a Spanish man, got married and decided to live here. At the beginning, it looks like an easy decision but, when the times go on, I discover that it was the most important and difficult decision in my

life

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. At

first

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, I didn't consider I would miss my family and friends and how hard will be to find a job. Being an immigrant has been really difficult, because the people

doesn´t trust

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don´t trust

in you and

you

of you or yourself

your

experience doesn't have value any more. So, the principal consequence for me (and for other

mexicans

a native or inhabitant of Mexico

Mexicans

womens

an adult female person (as opposed to a man)

women

than I know in Madrid) is

to begin

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again with the professional

life

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and maybe change the route, and

that is

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not really easy.

Otherwise

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, if you decide to

immigrate

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because you have a new job far away from your

country

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is more easy, because the work gives you a structure, social contacts and an income that helps you to survive in a better way. By other hand, there are people that have to

immigrate

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because they are obligated for the circumstances,

for example

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, the violence or the poor

economical

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economic

situation in their

country

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(even in Europe east,

Latinamerican

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Latin American

or Africa). Living in Madrid, is easy to know people that decided to

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immigrate

leave one's country of residence for a new one

emigrate

for these reasons, and if you talk with them, you will discover that the principal consequences for them is to leave their family or their little children in order to work and send money to their houses. More of them, has to live alone many years after to bring their family with them. Fortunately, Spain has different kind of economical helps for

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this people

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these people

this person

, even the

spanish

the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain

Spanish

people doesn´t like it, because they consider

that is

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unjust and it creates problems between them and creates discrimination and segregation.

However

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, they are good things if you

immigrate

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First

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, you discover a new culture, new traditions, new foods and beverages. If you are open and curious, it could be a good opportunity in your

life

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, because it is a new world. That´s been my case. Even the difficulties, I like to

life

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in Spain, is a precious

country

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, It has a lot of history, the food is delicious and it is secure. In conclusion, immigrating is difficult, but maybe, it could be a great experience. You have to be strong and value the better things that gives you your new

country

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Economic migration
Asylum seeker
Diaspora
Expatriate
Refugee status
Work permit/visa
Demographic shift
Naturalization
Xenophobia
Cultural assimilation
Multiculturalism
Social cohesion
Immigration policies
Border control
Undocumented immigrants

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Immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Fully explain your ideas

In today’s world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can art tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

The development of toursim contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English become the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

Some people believe that tourism promotes the economy while other argue that tourism destroy the environment. Discuss both views and give your oppinion

The rise of remote work has allowed many employees to work from anywhere in the world. However, this trend also presents some challenges.

Nowadays, many people have to work longer hours, and they feel more stressed out than before. What are the reasons? What can employers do to make their employees' lives easier?