Immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?
My name is Zulema Moreno, I come from México but I´m
a
immigrant in Spain. Maybe, the reason why I decided to Suggestion
an
immigrate
is one of the most common: I fall in love with a Spanish man, got married and decided to live here. At the beginning, it looks like an easy decision but, when the times go on, I discover that it was the most important and difficult decision in my life
. At first
, I didn't consider I would miss my family and friends and how hard will be to find a job. Being an immigrant has been really difficult, because the people doesn´t trust
in you and Suggestion
don´t trust
you
experience doesn't have value any more. So, the principal consequence for me (and for other of you or yourself
your
mexicans
a native or inhabitant of Mexico
Mexicans
womens
than I know in Madrid) is an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
to begin
again with the professional life
and maybe change the route, and that is
not really easy. Otherwise
, if you decide to immigrate
because you have a new job far away from your country
is more easy, because the work gives you a structure, social contacts and an income that helps you to survive in a better way.
By other hand, there are people that have to immigrate
because they are obligated for the circumstances, for example
, the violence or the poor economical
situation in their Suggestion
economic
country
(even in Europe east, Latinamerican
or Africa). Living in Madrid, is easy to know people that decided to Suggestion
Latin American
immigrate
for these reasons, and if you talk with them, you will discover that the principal consequences for them is to leave their family or their little children in order to work and send money to their houses. More of them, has to live alone many years after to bring their family with them. Fortunately, Spain has different kind of economical helps for leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
this people
, even the Suggestion
these people
this person
spanish
people doesn´t like it, because they consider the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
that is
unjust and it creates problems between them and creates discrimination and segregation.
However
, they are good things if you immigrate
. First
, you discover a new culture, new traditions, new foods and beverages. If you are open and curious, it could be a good opportunity in your life
, because it is a new world. That´s been my case. Even the difficulties, I like to life
in Spain, is a precious country
, It has a lot of history, the food is delicious and it is secure.
In conclusion, immigrating is difficult, but maybe, it could be a great experience. You have to be strong and value the better things that gives you your new country
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