Immigration has a major impact on society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

My name is Zulema Moreno, I come from México but I´m
a
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an
immigrant in Spain. Maybe, the reason why I decided to
immigrate
is one of the most common: I fall in love with a Spanish man, got married and decided to live here. At the beginning, it looks like an easy decision but, when the times go on, I discover that it was the most important and difficult decision in my
life
. At
first
, I didn't consider I would miss my family and friends and how hard will be to find a job. Being an immigrant has been really difficult, because the people
doesn´t trust
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don´t trust
in you and
you
of you or yourself
your
experience doesn't have value any more. So, the principal consequence for me (and for other
mexicans
a native or inhabitant of Mexico
Mexicans
womens
an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
than I know in Madrid) is
to begin
again with the professional
life
and maybe change the route, and
that is
not really easy.
Otherwise
, if you decide to
immigrate
because you have a new job far away from your
country
is more easy, because the work gives you a structure, social contacts and an income that helps you to survive in a better way. By other hand, there are people that have to
immigrate
because they are obligated for the circumstances,
for example
, the violence or the poor
economical
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economic
situation in their
country
(even in Europe east,
Latinamerican
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Latin American
or Africa). Living in Madrid, is easy to know people that decided to
immigrate
leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrate
for these reasons, and if you talk with them, you will discover that the principal consequences for them is to leave their family or their little children in order to work and send money to their houses. More of them, has to live alone many years after to bring their family with them. Fortunately, Spain has different kind of economical helps for
this people
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these people
this person
, even the
spanish
the Romance language spoken in most of Spain and the countries colonized by Spain
Spanish
people doesn´t like it, because they consider
that is
unjust and it creates problems between them and creates discrimination and segregation.
However
, they are good things if you
immigrate
.
First
, you discover a new culture, new traditions, new foods and beverages. If you are open and curious, it could be a good opportunity in your
life
, because it is a new world. That´s been my case. Even the difficulties, I like to
life
in Spain, is a precious
country
, It has a lot of history, the food is delicious and it is secure. In conclusion, immigrating is difficult, but maybe, it could be a great experience. You have to be strong and value the better things that gives you your new
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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