Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

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It is considered by most of the people that consuming non vegetarian foods may cause severe health issues, and

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, one should consume only vegetarian food. In my opinion,

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people should consume vegetarian foods as they are rich sources of essential proteins and minerals, some of the non- vegetarian foods are

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essential to have a balanced

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of all, everyone needs to include vegetarian foods in their

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as they are rich sources of proteins, vitamins, and nutrients. Some of the richest sources of proteins and minerals are in beetroot, capsicum, tomato, potato, and cauliflower.

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, vegetarian food consumes a lesser amount of edible oil while cooking.

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, less consumption of edible oil saves people from obesity and other health problems

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as diabetes and heart problems. To illustrate

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, people who are pure vegetarian are much more active and healthy as compared to those who consume high calories unhealthy food.

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, consuming vegetarian meal is essential to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

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, not all non vegetarian foods are unhealthy for people. There are

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a few non vegetarian foods that are

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crucial and a rich origin of proteins and minerals

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as chicken, beef, and mutton. These types of non vegetarian foods are stored in proper hygienic conditions. They are essential for people who are ailing from severe diseases as they are a rich source of proteins and minerals. Take,

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, chicken is one the protein-rich

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which takes very lesser time to cook and

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consumes a lesser amount of edible oil.

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, it's essential to include chicken and mutton in our

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. To conclude, In my view, I agree that one should consume varieties of vegetarian foods along with a few essential non- vegetarian foods to have a balanced

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. The government should put restrictions and ban on the consumption of harmful exotic animals to save the planet and people from harmful effects.

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Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

Your opinion

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