You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign University. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: * explain which course you are interested in - tell what you know about the University * explain why you should receive the scholarship

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Dear Sir, or Madam, I am writing to express my concern about applying to Sheridan

University

located in Mississauga. I am interested in the scholarship marketing management program. Ask, I was always keen to have knowledge about marketing. Luckily, I found

this

university

which is suitable for me as per my needs. I heard about

this

university

from my cousin who recently went there to pursue a business program. He told me the pros and cons of Sheridan

University

while

looking

into

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the website I was so uplifted by the pros and

as a result

, I decided to enrol in

this

program and explore the opportunities to study at Sheridan. I believe, I would be perfect as I am the most suitable candidate

due to

my grades and extracurricular activities will enhance my chance of getting a scholarship. Thank you for your consideration of my application and I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully Nishi Prajapati

Submitted by prajapatinishi2001 on Mon Nov 18 2024

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task achievement

Provide more details about the specific aspects or achievements in extracurricular activities that make you a suitable candidate for the scholarship.

coherence cohesion

Ensure a smoother transition between paragraphs by using linking phrases.

task achievement

You have maintained a formal and respectful tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for this type of inquiry.

coherence cohesion

Your paragraphs are well-structured, with distinct ideas in each section, making the letter easy to follow.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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You are interested in applying for a scholarship program to study at a foreign University. Write a letter to inquire about the course. In your letter: * explain which course you are interested in - tell what you know about the University * explain why you should receive the scholarship

Success if often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a good measure of success? How else could you measure whether somebody is successful or not

In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree?

Rich countries should not employ skilled labour from poor countries, as the poor countries need the workers more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Task 2 Many developed counties now have large numbers of people over the age 65 . What problems might this cause ? . How can the problems be solved