Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
The Health care system become so advanced these days.
Due to
this
, there are many types of drugs
available easily. People these days prefer these medicines
without doctor Consultation; consequently
, they face many problems afterwards. This
essay will enunciate the drawbacks of taking medicines
and treatments.
The first and foremost negative impact of taking alternative drugs
is that it can cause side effects to the patients even in some cases, individuals lose their lives because they don’t know the dose and type of drugs
. For instance
, Last
Friday I had a fever so my brothers brought two tablets from the local medical store. when I checked the dose it was 600mg, for a normal fever it should be only 300mg. Folks take these medicines
because these types of medicine give instant relief, that is
the main reason people consume these types of drugs
.
Besides
this
, people also
start migrating toward alternative treatments as well. For instance
, if someone has tooth pain instead
of going to a dentist they prefer to go to local doctors
. These doctors
even do not have proper degrees. Individuals prefer these doctors
because they charge less. Even in some cases, it has also
been seen that sometimes they damage the nerve which as a result
causes more damage in the future. For example
, these alternative treatment providers do not know what they are doing exactly, The same happened with my friend who went to a local dentist during a tooth extraction he damaged the other teeth due to
which he has a cavity in the other teeth as well.
To conclude
, one can say these local doctors
and medicines
can harm you to a greater extent. For sure these drugs
give instant relief but in the long run, they damage the internal system very badly. So, no drug should not be consumed without the consultation of a doctor. Even there is a need for proper treatments from a real doctor who can understand the actual situation of a patient and make a diagnosis accordingly
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