Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that the most crucial privilege of being wealthy is being able to bless people who are less fortunate.
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I think that having the ability mentioned above is important, I believe that there are more valuable things to being rich. There are reasons to why being able to help people in need is amazing and two of them are the most apparent.
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, the people that receive help are going to have a better life. To
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explain, it is certain that poor people who struggle to afford food, as well as other basic needs, will be blissful when received capital or food supply.
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, people are going to feel better about themselves.
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, the smallest help that a person can give another
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(maybe just a dollar), can make someone smile and make the person who did it feels good about
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themselves
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it is beneficial that people are able to help others, two other things that a rich person can do can be more meaningful. The
first
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thing is to be able to help and reward themselves. After all, they have earned their money from hard work and dedication, so it would only be right if they get to enjoy their own achievements.
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, it
is being
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has been
capable of giving back to the very people who have aided them,
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as, their family and friends. Being able to reward people who have been loyal to
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and supportive of
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will make
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feel ravishing and satisfied with
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's morals. To conclude, being able to send help to the ones in need is
fantastic but
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fantastic, but
it is still not the most meaningful thing about being financially advantaged.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wealthy
  • financial resources
  • philanthropy
  • charitable organizations
  • donations
  • fundraising
  • support
  • initiatives
  • contribute
  • fulfillment
  • purpose
  • selfless
  • altruistic
  • prioritize
  • personal gain
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