You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

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Dear Sir, I am an international student in my

second

year of the Associate of Science at the university. My programme advisor is

Mr.

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Stephen Joly and I am a

full time

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student on campus. I am writing to request a week off from university starting from 21st of

month. I have to go back to my home country to attend my sister's wedding and my family is expecting me to join them on

this

wonderful family occasion.

This

is going to be the

first

marriage from our young generation in the family.

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I will be missing my lectures but I have requested my professors to reschedule my assessments and I have a group of friends studying

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classes and they will give me their notes concerning what I have missed. I would be very grateful if you can give me permission to take one week off. I will look forward

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decision Yours faithfully Abeldeep Sekhon

Submitted by Abeldeep Sekhon on Thu Jun 25 2020

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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

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