Some people think only online reading should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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While some people argue that online reading beneficial for learning on the other side some people consider printed material more helpful for learning as
compare
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compared
comparable
to online reading.In my opinion
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printed material would be more effective in learning.
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of all
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In online reading
one
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cannot concentrate properly and need continue to stare at
screen
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the screen
a screen
screens
could
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effect
have an effect upon
affect
the eyesight of
child
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children
the child
a child
. There are some payable sites we have to pay if we want to browse those sites in
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case if we want to read that material again in
future
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the future
we will not able to read so its lead to wastage of money. Because
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as we all know children
can not
can not
cannot
easily catch the things by reading
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the thing named or in question
it
once they need
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of
revision for learning. On the other side
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,
if child's
do have printed
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print
material they can read it anywhere and anytime.
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one
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One
can
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carry it with them and read during travelling.
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Moreover
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Moreover, one
one
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can use it multi time and
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handover it to
needy person
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needy persons
a needy person
needy people
the needy person
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According to me
one
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can concentrate properly during reading from paper. At the end,
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the thing named or in question
it
depends upon once
level
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the level
a level
of understanding some are more comfortable
by learning using
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learning by using
online sites whereas some are prefer printed materials.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vast range
  • interactive features
  • enhance learning
  • engagement
  • tactile experience
  • screen-related distractions
  • eye strain
  • physical books
  • concentration
  • comprehension
  • hybrid approach
  • diverse learning preferences
  • well-rounded reading habit
  • responsibly
  • digital age
  • foundational skills
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