Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People hold different views about the safety of the wild animals, as some believe that not all animals are vital and
hence
they should not be protected. In my opinion, I completely disagree with the above view, as the wild animals are an important part in maintaining the ecological balance. On the one hand, I believe that all the wild animals play an important role in maintaining the ecological balance in the nature. The main reason is that they are a part of a food chain and the extinction of some wild animals will have dire consequences on the nature which will
also
effect
have an effect upon
affect
humans.
For example
, a frog feeds on a grasshopper, and if the frogs are not protected
then
the population of the grasshoppers will be out of control which will result in eating of crops and agricultural farms by the grasshoppers.
Therefore
,
existence
Suggestion
the existence
of each wild animal, in the nature, is important and should be protected by the humans.
On the other hand
, some people argue that wild animals
such
as Tigers and Lions should not be protected. The main reason could be a threat to
humans
Suggestion
human
human's
life from them.
In other words
, Lions and Tigers are carnivorous and their primary food includes
flesh
Suggestion
the flesh
of other animals. There have been many instances
were
In or at or to what place
where
humans are killed and eaten by them.
For instance
, according to a study conducted by the Stanford University, in the UK, states that 45% of the people were killed by the Lions while trekking in the Gir forest. In conclusion, each wild animals equally contributes in balancing the ecosystem of which humans are a part.
As a result
, all the wild animals should be protected.
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  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • conservation status
  • ecological significance
  • holistic approach
  • endangered species
  • natural heritage
  • unforeseen negative impacts
  • economically non-viable
  • prioritization
  • ecosystem balance
  • conservation efforts
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