It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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We cannot refuse that success in
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or the art world of
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stars or famous artists
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natural
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, we did not know that behind the scene of
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stars or famous artists successfully as the result natural
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or hard practice or both. Overall, it can be seen, someone, who need for success, should have both natural
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and hard
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, natural
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help people know what they should do.
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, May is the best tennis player. She had been interviewing by some magazine. She told about tennis
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that she likes to play tennis, but she does not know that tennis is the
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for her. She just only need to play tennis and
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thing helps she know what she would do. She told to an interviewer that before she will be achieved with the best tennis player. She has had to hard
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, sometime she has injures from
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she will say to herself that keep fighting.
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, people who have to hard
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, can be achieved
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.
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, Messy is the best football player. He always told the reporters who interview him that he did not have a natural
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about football.
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, he just practice so hard to play football. To summarise, there are many happen behind the scene of
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stars and famous artists. It can be seen that
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stars and famous artists, who can achieve and success in their life, have not only natural
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but hard
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also
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • natural talent
  • innate ability
  • genetic predisposition
  • nurture
  • nurturing
  • develop
  • cultivate
  • foster
  • encourage
  • inherit
  • unravel
  • reveal
  • demonstrate
  • evidence
  • proof
  • counterargument
  • counter
  • overcome
  • compensate
  • arguably
  • debate
  • controversial
  • persuasive
  • convincing
  • conclusive
  • critical
  • essential
  • crucial
  • vital
  • significant
  • prominent
  • noteworthy
  • imperative
  • compulsory
  • fundamental
  • compelling
  • persuasive
  • support
  • favor
  • oppose
  • disagree
  • acknowledge
  • consider
  • claim
  • view
  • belief
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