Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

In recent
times many
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times, many
people are suffering from
obesity
,
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,
which means
enormous increase
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an enormous increase
in
weight
in a short period of time. In my opinion the main reason for
this
type of disease is not having a proper food habits.
if
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If
proper food habits are
maintained
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maintained, then
then
no people will suffer from
weight
issues.
Firstly people
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Firstly, people
not having a proper diet schedule will suffer from
this
type of disease. Food with more fat content like meat
,
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,
sugar products are the main sources to cause
obesity
. Not only the diet
plan but
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plan, but
also
the daily exercise
also
important. People who
drinks
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drink
are drinking
are drunk
have drunk
have been drinking
water more than needed
also
effects to
over
usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
weight
,
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,
which is not
obesity
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obese
.
For
example I
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example, I
know one person who is unconscious about his health
,
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,
he suddenly gains more
weight
and
then
he doesn't walk on its own
.
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.
Finally
doctor
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the doctor
a doctor
confirmed it as
obesity
. The major effects of the
over
usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it
overweight
weight
are mainly health issues
such
as heart related problems, breathing problems
.
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.
Obese people don't stand on their own and they are not able to walk more distances.
However it
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However, it
leads to get other diseases like sugar and kidney problems. Those persons who
has
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have
a problem with overweight
also suffers
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also suffer
from digestion problems. They cannot do work on their own
,
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,
someone have to help them.
obesity
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Obesity
is really a serious issue
Finally I
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Finally, I
conclude that if the people change their food plans and do regular exercise gives them a lot of benefit. People having
weight
gain in a very short period of time
has
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have
to consult
doctor
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a doctor
the doctor
,
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,
because it leads to more problems based on health.
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