Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?

In recent

times many

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times, many

people are suffering from

obesity

,

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,

which means

enormous increase

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an enormous increase

in

weight

in a short period of time. In my opinion the main reason for

this

type of disease is not having a proper food habits.

if

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If

proper food habits are

maintained

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maintained, then

then

no people will suffer from

weight

issues.

Firstly people

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Firstly, people

not having a proper diet schedule will suffer from

this

type of disease. Food with more fat content like meat

,

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sugar products are the main sources to cause

obesity

. Not only the diet

plan but

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plan, but

also

the daily exercise

also

important. People who

drinks

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drink

are drinking

are drunk

have drunk

have been drinking

water more than needed

also

effects to

over

usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it

overweight

weight

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which is not

obesity

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obese

.

For

example I

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example, I

know one person who is unconscious about his health

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,

he suddenly gains more

weight

and

then

he doesn't walk on its own

.

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.

Finally

doctor

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the doctor

a doctor

confirmed it as

obesity

. The major effects of the

over

usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it

overweight

weight

are mainly health issues

such

as heart related problems, breathing problems

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Obese people don't stand on their own and they are not able to walk more distances.

However it

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However, it

leads to get other diseases like sugar and kidney problems. Those persons who

has

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have

a problem with overweight

also suffers

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also suffer

from digestion problems. They cannot do work on their own

,

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someone have to help them.

obesity

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Obesity

is really a serious issue

Finally I

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Finally, I

conclude that if the people change their food plans and do regular exercise gives them a lot of benefit. People having

weight

gain in a very short period of time

has

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have

to consult

doctor

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a doctor

the doctor

,

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because it leads to more problems based on health.