Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What are the main effects of this epidemic?
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in Suggestion
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weight
in a short period of time. In my opinion the main reason for this
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maintained
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maintained, then
then
no people will suffer from weight
issues.
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also
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drink
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have been drinking
also
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overweight
weight
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as heart related problems, breathing problems .
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