In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
People’s accommodation depends on many factors and forms the lifestyle of residents everywhere. In some countries, families prefer to own their residence because they think that it is advantageous. In my opinion,
this
is a disadvantageous situation because if we limited our thought to buy or rent a housing property, it would negatively affect our future. My discussion with supporting evidences will be illustrated in the following lines.
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Firstly
, there is a cultural diversity all over the world which forms the norms and traditions of every society. Linking Words
Moreover
, inside the society there are different ways of thinking; Linking Words
thus
, we can find that city Linking Words
traditions
are not the same as rural areas. Suggestion
tradition
This
can be exemplified by the opinions of some people in a big city Linking Words
such
as Cairo, the capital of Egypt, which makes them prefer to rent an apartment because Linking Words
this
gives them more flexibility to easily relocate depending on their job location. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, people who live in small cities, Linking Words
such
as in Upper Egypt, think that renting is disadvantageous. Linking Words
This
is because they are normally live and work in the same area and they do not relocate. Linking Words
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this
case is supposed to be completely Linking Words
depends
on the cultural diversity.
In my opinion, there are more important issues than being the owner or renter; Suggestion
depended
accordingly
, I opine that it is a negative thought. Linking Words
In other words
, everyone is free to decide how to invest his money without insisting to use a portion of it in a residential property. Linking Words
For instance
, if someone decided freely to invest his money in a small project and postponed owning a house, he could be wealthy. Linking Words
Thus
, flexible thinking may produce successful citizens.
In conclusion, owning a residence is not the most important decision in our life. Linking Words
Therefore
, I believe that it is a negative situation to focus on it because it may negatively affect the individuals’ future.Linking Words
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