In the past people used to wear their traditional clothes depending on their culture. Nowadays the trend is changing, and people wear similar clothes. Is it a positive or negative development?

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In the race of becoming a global man, people
also
lose heredity of tradition and clothing style is one the most
supstible
element of it. But, I believe
this
is the welcoming change and we have to adopt it. In the below essay I will try to express why I believe so. Nowadays there are only limited countries, like Bhutan, who preserve their tradition to wear authentic wear as the casual and regular clothes, as people of the most of the country shifted to western wear as the regular wear, and there is the major reason behind that
firstly
modern clothes are more comfortable and lightweight.
Secondly
, a new generation of clothes does not need care, like ironing and washing methods, as compared to traditional wear.
Thirdly
, as it is generic and common, a lot of style, choice of colours, combinations and range is available.
In addition
to the style, colour and comfort, it
also
alleviates the
casteism
issue and discrimination which was a serious issue in the past.
For example
, in the past, Punjabi culture used to have a different colour of the turban to identify the cast of the person, to discriminate against the inferior cast. But after acceptance of the western wear, that ailment was encountered automatic as nowadays clothes are mostly generic
instead
of the specific for the particular cast. Anyhow, as we tend to wear the the generic clothes as the global community, some of the countries, like India, has to face the economic crisis as country like china mass manufacture low quality wears and use dumping strategy by selling it at very low cost, to gain advantages again the local manufacturer who used to produce exceptional quality at high cost.
Although
we have the loss at the economic front, we can resolve it with the help of good financial strategy and “Made in India” sentiment, but the benefit of modern and generic clothes are unprecedented.
Submitted by Jay Patel on

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