Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It has been recently argued that
music
can reduce
borders effect
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the border effect
border effect
between different nations and gathers people together regardless of their nationality or age. I believe
this
statement could be right about
cultural correlation while
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the cultural correlation, while
the cultural correlation while
it is not helpful in terms of reducing the generation gap.
As a result
of technological development nowadays the world like a global village and it is easy to be familiar with the variety of cultural aspects of
countries
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the countries
which is including
music
as well.
every
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Every
person can enjoy the melody of
music even
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music, even
they were not familiar with the language of the song.
In addition
, there are thousands of
music
that produce in international languages like English and French every year and there are several singers who held a concert tour on different continents for foreign audiences, so cultural differences could not be a barrier.
On the other hand
, there are some disagreements
on
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about
the meaning of pleasant
music
among different ages. Elders prefer to listen to the song which belongs to their young ages to reminisce. Their favorite types of
music
additionally
often are light
music
or classical because these kinds of songs most of the times concentrate on topics like love and emotional perspective of life at the same time, teenagers beloved lyrics contain a social problem or political issue in some cases
also
there are some new types of
music
such
as metal or rap that it is not easy to listen for former generations. To sum up, every society has melody producers who are popular in the whole
world but
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world, but
unfortunately, people of different ages are not a fan of a particular form of
music
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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