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Some people think that governments should spend money on railways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Fast and reliable
transport
 system is one of the crucial aspect of today’s modern life. Either its developing or developed country,
transport
 infrastructure is one of the sectors which needs constant improvement.
Therefore
, when it comes to the budget, some people urge to invest more in roads rather than
railway
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a railway
the railway
railways
. I believe
these both areas
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both these areas
 need
attention
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attention, however
however
 railway condition is much required to
expand
use up, consume fully
expend
 funds on it. My thoughts are based on a fact that,
train
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the train
 provides a facility of commutation to thousands of users simultaneously. It
also use
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is also used
 to cargo shipments and luggage.
Further
, as it is considered as a fastest service of transportation so it not only saves the time of others but
also
 impact on
a
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an
 environment as well. Because mostly
railways
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railway
 tracks laid out of the urban areas so its pollution
effects
the conscious subjective aspect of feeling or emotion
affects
 the environment comparatively less than the road
traffic
.
which
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Which
 emphasizes to regulate the reduction of
traffic
 on
roads
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roads?
On the other hand
,
traffic
pollution which
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pollution, which
 is raised by road
traffic
 is getting
high
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higher
 day by day with a rapid growth of
population
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the population
 globally. It
diversely effecting
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is diversely effecting
is diversely effected
 a
planet
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planet, therefore
therefore
 as a solution to cater
this
 problem a sub-
sequential
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sequence
 and reliable alternative
transport
 system must be considered with continuous improvements. In my opinion, with a support of
this
 essay I would suggest to
spent
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spend
 more in railway tracks and rail service to provide better service with effective communication and updates. It will not only beneficial for
transport
sector but
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sector, but
also
 for
environment
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the environment
 as well.
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