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Nowadays people prefer digital books
instead
of traditional books. It is thought that by some
This
trend is
good step
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a good step
for mankind
however
other do not.
This
essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages associated with
this
modern invention
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There are some obvious benefits
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Fristly
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Firstly
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In the
preapearing
make ready or suitable or equip in advance for a particular purpose or for some use, event, etc
preparing
e-books trees are not used by
company
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the company
companies
a company
. Swelling e-books reduce harvesting
hundered
being ten more than ninety
hundred
hundreds
of thousand of trees which emit massive carbon dioxide
to
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in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
every day
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Secondely
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Secondly
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digital books can be
easly
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
stored on electronic devices
such
as computers
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tablets
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smartphones
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Therefore
, people can take their all books where they go and there are a lot of space in their home
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In my
country most
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country, most
universities offer digital lectures to students
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Neverthless despite
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Nevertheless, despite
Nevertheless despite
the advantages above
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gaining momentum e-books can create major drawbacks
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One potentially dangerous problem is eyestrain
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when
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When
reader
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the reader
is reading books on the screen get eyestrain
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Because devices emit
harmfull
causing or capable of causing harm
harmful
light from their screens
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It has been proven that reading from
screen
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a screen
the screen
screens
can
creat
make or cause to be or to become
create
stress and anger on
reader
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the reader
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Another obvious issue that
this
technological invention requires some expensive devices as computer
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laptop etc..
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And
also
continuous supply of electricity for recharging their batteries
therefore
poor people may not be able to afford them. In conclusion
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incrasing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
e-books and e-books reader
bring
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brings
significant advantages to people
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environment
also
atmosphere as reduce cutting trees and
conveniencing
to carry vast books and files
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But it must be noticed there are serious disadvantages which bad affect people’s
healthy
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health
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