With the rise of e-books comes the decline inpapaerbooks Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not . What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Nowadays people prefer digital books

instead

of traditional books. It is thought that by some

This

trend is

good step

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a good step

for mankind

however

other do not.

This

essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages associated with

this

modern invention

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38 Admittedly

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There are some obvious benefits

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Fristly

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Firstly

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In the

preapearing

make ready or suitable or equip in advance for a particular purpose or for some use, event, etc

preparing

e-books trees are not used by

company

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the company

companies

a company

. Swelling e-books reduce harvesting

hundered

being ten more than ninety

hundred

hundreds

of thousand of trees which emit massive carbon dioxide

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atmosphere

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the atmosphere

every day

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Secondely

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Secondly

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digital books can be

easly

with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')

easily

stored on electronic devices

such

as computers

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tablets

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smartphones

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Therefore

, people can take their all books where they go and there are a lot of space in their home

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In my

country most

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country, most

universities offer digital lectures to students

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Neverthless despite

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Nevertheless, despite

Nevertheless despite

the advantages above

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gaining momentum e-books can create major drawbacks

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One potentially dangerous problem is eyestrain

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when

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When

reader

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the reader

is reading books on the screen get eyestrain

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Because devices emit

harmfull

causing or capable of causing harm

harmful

light from their screens

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It has been proven that reading from

screen

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a screen

the screen

screens

can

creat

make or cause to be or to become

create

stress and anger on

reader

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the reader

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Another obvious issue that

this

technological invention requires some expensive devices as computer

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laptop etc..

and

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And

also

continuous supply of electricity for recharging their batteries

therefore

poor people may not be able to afford them. In conclusion

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incrasing

becoming greater or larger

increasing

e-books and e-books reader

bring

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brings

significant advantages to people

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environment

also

atmosphere as reduce cutting trees and

conveniencing

to carry vast books and files

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But it must be noticed there are serious disadvantages which bad affect people’s

healthy

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health

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With the rise of e-books comes the decline inpapaerbooks Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not . What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Fully explain your ideas

The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The education of young people is the main priority in countries around the world. Some people believe that educating adults who cannot read or write is essential for the society and more funding should be made available for it. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes are recycled. They believe that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you believe that laws are needed to make people recycle more of their wastes.