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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

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Even though the
crime
 convicts have served their jail terms, many of them still commit more crimes. The reason for
this
 could be, they developed some kind of resilient to believe that the benefit they received from their action outweighed the
punishment
 they received. Some potential solutions to prevent
this
 might be to extend the
punishment
 with rehabilitations and
also
 training courses on how they can live as a normal person. Usually people overestimate something that they have never experienced before.
Therefore
, for those who have never committed any
crime
, the
punishment
 itself serves as an effective method to stop them from doing any criminal act.
However
, for those who committed
crime
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a crime
the crime
crimes
, once they had gone through the
punishment
,
this
 could provide them with an evidence that they were able to bear with the consequences of their action. Some
first
 offenders might believe that the wrongdoing they did, might be still perceived as beneficial, so that they still repeat the crimes they committed. One of the solutions to address
this
 issue is to introduce some rehabilitation programs and training course on top of the
punishment
 they received, which would help them to understand and reflect the wrongdoing they performed. Lack of education and skill to earn a living, might be another trigger for people to commit
crime
, for
this
 reason, providing training courses to equip them with appropriate skills to start a new life could be another potential solution. The reason for some offenders to continue committing
crime even
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crime, even
 after receiving their
punishment
 could be because they might develop a certain of mental strength
such
 that
punishment
 alone is insufficient to prevent them to follow the law in their life. Providing rehabilitation program and training courses after completing the
punishment
 periods are essential steps that can be implemented to solve
this
 problem.
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