The following maps show some of the changes that have taken placein Dubai in recent decades Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant

The two presented maps illustrate how Dubai’s street has changed after the construction of several facilities between the previous years and currently.
Overall
, Dubai has witnessed significant transformation after some provision on the street from the preceding years that leads to a more busy city today. As we can see in the first picture, there was a big street with a wide multi-directional road surrounding a gigantic roundabout. On the top right-hand and left-hand corner, there were huge empty fields with few buildings. Along the kerb of the grounds, many
bruned
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burned
pruned
bushes were grown by the side of the edge of
those kerb
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that kerb
those kerbs
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. In comparison to the first picture, the second one shows that there have been several trees set up around the
roudabout
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roundabout
. A lot of buildings and skyscrapers have
also
been introduced to the north-east and the south-west of the roundabout.
In addition
, another interesting development
have
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been the cutting down of bushes for the construction of those buildings.
Moreover
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the road and the whole city
has
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have
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looked more modern and crowded since there have been more cars moving everywhere.
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