Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

While it is true that most people prefer pursuing tertiary education rather than following vocational training courses, I personally agree that the quantities of

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graduates and manual workers

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as plumbers or electricians should be equivalent. There are several reasons why people opt to pursue higher education.

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, those who graduate from top-tier universities may have access to more and better

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opportunities.

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is because recruiters tend to

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promote over another

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candidates who have formal qualifications over who do not.

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,

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seekers with

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degrees are likely to get a well-paid

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.

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, most of employers require formal qualifications as an indispensable role that

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hunters are able to be unemployed if they do not have.

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, if medical graduates desire to be recruited into hospitals, these candidates

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need

to have at least a formal degree which is

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an

evidence of competence since

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a health facility where patients receive treatment

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can not recruit doctors without professional expertise.

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, I believe that more people should be facilitated to be trained in skilled professions including electrical or plumbing works.

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workers are vital when new buildings are constructed or when existing buildings are renovated and maintained. In fact, a permanent maintenance staff is employed in apartments or corporations, ensuring the safety of all who use the buildings.

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, becoming to electricians or plumbers

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permits

workers to have a steady

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without too much

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investment

in term of money and time.

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, it is beneficial for those who are not academically inclined to follow vocational training courses which are not only less exorbitant

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costs, but

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in a short time period

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of spending a great deal of money and at least 4 years going to

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.   In conclusion, I believe that more people should be trained in professions in order to ensure the balance between

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graduates and skilled workers

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as plumbers or electricians.