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Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people, however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Access to computers has increased significantly over recent decades, and the number of people playing games or watching visual materials on computers has increased as well. While
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 games, mostly have a bad reputation for causing negative effects on the mental and physical health of the people playing them, spending
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 online playing or watching videos has its advantages
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 as improve mood and reduce anxiety,
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 to develop the ability to problem solving and logic. In believe that expanding using new technology for entertainment or business is a beneficial gate to the future. The majority of people nowadays are staying at home because of the Corona virus pandemic, which means a large amount of
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 to be spent in a social distance, and that create a tremendous
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 that needed to be occupied. Based on the current situations, films and computer games have an extremely positive physiological effect on individuals.
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, Dr. Mohamed Taha, who is a famous shrinks was recently talking about how entertainment affect positively on mood, as well, there are many research papers which prove that electronic games train the brain to think of creative ways to solve the puzzles and other problem in a short
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. Despite, the merits of attending films and playing computer games, it has demerits
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 as aggression.
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 in the level of aggression is one of the most detrimental effects of playing a
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 game. Research shows that exposure to violent
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 increases aggressive behaviour in children. It can push the children to violence and lower pro-social behaviour. In conclusion, the both aspects of playing
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 games and watching movies have been shown. It can be a useful or harmful according how people use it. I’m of the belief of that community should increase the
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 of watching and playing games, but under control of their mental health advisors.
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