Some people believe that the developing nations should focus more on the primary needs of the citizens. Other, however, think that more money should be diverted for space research and defence system. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

While a group of people suggests that the
third
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world
country
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should take care
first
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the basic needs of their citizen by allocating extra money to it, others defend it with the importance of space research and armed force.
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with the primary needs, there are several reasons why some people are finding
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idea so important.
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, to build the better community with the help of
basic needs
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the basic needs
of people,
in particular
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food, water and medicines. If the developing
nation
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can not spare enough budget
on
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for
it, there will be a number of
concequences
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
,
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as an increasing ratio of crime, and pandemic
dieseases
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
disease
. Another reason is, to improve the
econmy
the system of production and distribution and consumption
economy
of the
nation
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by spending more money on the primary education. The educated people will involve more in the job and business, and will participate in enhancing the tax fund.
For example
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, India had a huge ratio of
illitrate
not able to read or write
illiterate
people few decades ago, but now
thing
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things
a thing
the thing
has been changed with the help of rules and funding from the government to the public schools.
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, at the other side, a group of people, who defended
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thought, generally focuses on
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’s protection and development in a number of ways. One of the main factor is to enhance the level of current technology by space research.
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can be
benefitial
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
to different sectors.
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, the range of communication industry will be
increase
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increased
. Another factor is to protect from the terrorist group. In order to secure the long border around the
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, every
nation
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requires a huge number of soldiers and their arm equipments, which needs a lot of fund to allocate,
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by
but
the government. In conclusion, whereas a developing
nation
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has
responsiblity
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a responsibility
responsibility
to focus on basic needs
for
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of
living and earning, as well as securing his
country
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from outside attackers and improving their technology resources. I believe, as a growing
country
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, they should acquire statistics of different area’s
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and
then
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need to divide the
propotion
being in due proportion
proportionate
of fund
accordingly
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.

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