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world, a new generation
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to create their own families when they reach thirty age, which was totally different in the past. I
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highly
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this
attitude in our new world, and I believe that the advantages of
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the drawbacks. In
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both sides of
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and support my opinion as well.
On one hand, a majority of
individuals'Change noun form
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to have their own families, when they are thirties, as
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that certain age they almost completed their studies and started their business direction. Those abilities help them to be able to take the responsibility of having a family. Presently, both male and female
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been
following
this
concept in life. As, they believe that
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a family requires lots of things,
such
as having a house,
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job and sufficient money as well.
For instance
, In
most
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individuals start to have a family when they have financial and social skills.
In contrast
, in the past people
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an easier life with
less challengeFix the agreement mistake
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, which made them start their
familyFix the agreement mistake
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earlier.
Moreover
, strong
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between small
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and big
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give great help to small, new
familyFix the agreement mistake
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.
Also
, most of the ladies in the past were not working and in some regions not even go to school.
For
this
reason, most of the family
encouragesCorrect subject-verb agreement
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their children to get married earlier.
For example
, in18th century people used to start their
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in
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twenties and
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lots of babies.
To sum up
, I think in our new
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it is so difficult to start
familyAdd an article
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before the thirties, because of all the responsibility and challenge people need to face now.