some people think computer and internet are important in childrens study but others think students can learn effectively in schools with teachers.discuss both views

technology-driven era, some proponents believed that computers and the
are better
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for children’s
study whereas
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study, whereas
others have the perception that only school teachers can teach them effectively. In
essay, I shall discuss both the views.
To begin
, computers and the
are replacing the traditional
of teaching it does not require big classrooms and children can study at home. It provides a virtual classroom which is easily accessible with electricity and
connection from anywhere, with the help of virtual classroom students can find numerous knowledge of the whole universe.
, Computer and
are joining the whole worlds, teachers, trainers, coaches, and guardians those are sitting in one country can teach the students of another country. It is the most economical
of teaching because it saves them time and money for teachers and students.
, the traditional
of teaching is still
popular according
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popular, according
to some proponent beliefs. They think classroom teaching can bring the moral values to students, because with the peer groups’ students can learn leadership skills, cooperativeness, working in a team and helping others and on the
, there is no control over the information available, which can mislead the students.
, teaching in schools having a human touch where students can exchange their ideas and thoughts other than study.
The support
provided by teacher makes students mentally, emotionally, and physically strong. To conclude, both modern and traditional ways of teaching are important and have their own pros-and-cons and the decision of choosing which teaching
is suitable for students is completely sole
having or using the ability to act or decide according to your own discretion or judgment
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