We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
In today’s modern world, any domain or industry use of computers has become inevitable,
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can take charge of our world. Use synonyms
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with, the involvement of the electrical brain in our current workflow will make it extremely easy, pleasant, and efficient. To work with. Linking Words
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, just imagine the banking sector without computers and the internet, It will be total chaos. Linking Words
Firstly
, for a human to manage the number of logs and conditions on the paper is nearly impossible. Linking Words
Secondly
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can communicate and centralize the data seamlessly which is not possible for mortals. Use synonyms
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, the data saved, on paper can be destroyed and lost and in the brain can be forgotten which, is not the case with electric data stored on the cloud storage can be recovered any time.
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-based hybrid workflow reduces the chances of error drastically where every bit of error can cause human life loss, Use synonyms
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, the aviation industry. Linking Words
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helps to reduce human fatigue, a minutely programmed machine can take charge of all of the generic tasks which able the person to focus on the more important and complex tasks. To add more, Helping hand like a Linking Words
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help to reduce the workforce, Linking Words
for instance
, the automobile industry where mostly welding and adhesive work is done by the robotic arms.
In a nutshell, Computers are companion what can make our life comfortable, faster, efficient, and safe. Linking Words
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can’t make any decision by itself, it needs its master, a human, to program it. So it will never able to take over human life.Suggestion
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...