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Nowadays, more people watch sport on TV rather than play it. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is true that there
are
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is
 an increase in
number
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the number
 of people choosing to watch
sport
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 on television
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 of playing it.
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 essay will think that the negative and positive effects of
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phenomenol
any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomenon
 are in equal measure. On the one hand, watching
sport
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 on
TV
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 can be advantageous, for reasons related to enhancing connectivity and encouraging people to play sports. With regard to the former, families who share the same interest in
sport
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 can choose to spend their quality time and relax for watching sports on television with each other. Some sports are played on holidays and weekend, and
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, contributes to bringing families together and enhancing interaction between family members.
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, people can expand their social circle by watching sports with others who
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 follow the same
sport
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 team. The
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 point is that when people who have watched and attracted by some particular sports, they might be more likely to get out and play sports themselves. In the long run, they will take that
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sport
a point located with respect to surface features of some region
spot
 as a needed exercise, which can get them to be more active and healthier, especially
to
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for
 the youngsters.
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 tendency of watching sports,
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, could be considered from the opposite angle in terms of people's health and
weath
the state of being rich and affluent; having a plentiful supply of material goods and money
wealth
worth
inquality
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of quality
in quality
. Chief among these is that if people spend too much time for watching
TV
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, which
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 means they sit down for
long time
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a long time
,
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 can lead to some
health's
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health
 risk of
sedentary lifestyle
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a sedentary lifestyle
. According to some expert opinions, every two additional hours people spent watching
TV
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, a person's risk of death from heart disease and diabetes will rise significantly. As far as the
second
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 idea is concerned, a large number of views frequently can lead to players being given enormous salaries, thereby increasing income disparity among athletes in different sports and social envy.
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 may be considered bad for society, particularly when certain
sport
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 stars with
such
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 income behave badly in public places or on social media, which can negatively influence to people who look up to them, especially the young. To summarise, the trend of watching sports on
TV
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 rather than playing it will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals.

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