Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered?
In present time the younger generation is highly affected by the rare diseases which earlier used to be only contracted in grownups. From those, overweight is mostly found in little ones.
This
essay will discuss how the junk /packed Linking Words
food
has affected the health of the little ones with various diseases as well as suggesting some relevant solutions to the problem.
The major problem these days is that people are getting more dependent on packed / junk Use synonyms
food
. As we all know that nowadays both parents are working and because of their busy schedule, they are giving preference to packed foods. They find it the easiest way of sorting out lunch and dinner options Use synonyms
instead
of cooking everything in house, rather they prefer to buy semi prepared meals which Linking Words
further
leads to obesity, bulkiness. Even diseases like cancer is very common in kids because of radio-active elements present in packed foods.
A possible solution to Linking Words
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problem is that students and parents should be educated about the dangers of obesity and eating fast foods. Linking Words
That is
to say that schools and government should educate pupils about the consequences of eating fatty meals. Linking Words
As a result
, they will think twice before asking their parents to eat junk Linking Words
food
and Use synonyms
this
can eventually reduce the chances of encounter diseases. Linking Words
For instance
, a similar initiative implemented in the UK and Linking Words
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resulted in a 20% decrease in the number of children suffering from obesity
To conclude, the government should take proactive attention in Linking Words
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regard and should conduct free medical seminars which explains the merits of fresh Linking Words
food
in relation to the demerits of packed Use synonyms
food
to the parents.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite