Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money . Write a letter to the local council . In your letter Guve details of how you and your friends or family use the centre . Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community . Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope you're doing well. I have come to know through a reliable source that the local council is planning to close only
leisure
and sports Correct article usage
the leisure
centre
in the area because of insufficient funds or saving money.
I thinkFix the agreement mistake
centres
,
it is not a good idea to handle the issues Remove the comma
apply
like
Change preposition
in
this
way. The sports centre
has a
great importance for the residents of the society and the people spend their free time in positive and healthy Remove the article
apply
activties
.
Correct your spelling
activities
In addition
, I would like to express my concerns also
that my family and all my friends are regular members of the centre
and if you step forward according to
your plan, it would create a disappointment among the community people.
Furthermore
, you should have to conduct a survey before taking this
immature decision. If you could get the opinion of the local people, I am sure you will never think about to do
so.
Please take serious notice of my complaint and ask the local council cabinet to take proper measures, so they will be able to save funds rather than closing the Change the verb form
doing
centre
.
I shall be grateful for your kindness.
Yours Faithfully,
Kunwar.Submitted by computersinn2007 on
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Grammar and Spelling
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Detail and Development
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Structure
Consider organizing your letter with clear paragraphs for each point you make, ensuring there's a logical flow from the introduction, through your arguments, to your conclusion.
Personal Connection
You have done well in expressing your personal connection to the centre and its importance to your family and friends.
Tone
Your polite tone and formal language appropriately fit the context of a letter to local council officials.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.